LOVE EXPERIMENT

C'est vraiment beau. On peut comprendre l'histoire d'une fille rien qu'en lisant.

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Hello Parentleanne : interesting but sadness, grief, melancholy, cannot really together be THE ONLY purpose for poetry; I would even dare say that relationship, love, can be only one little bit of poetry, for too much is always too much. Don't take me wrong your work is good, I just kind of feel that you cannot get away from sorrow maybe is it because your own sorrow in your daily life invade your imagination ? It seems your are overwhelmed by your very own depression. It is what your poetry reveals at the first reading. You could find other topics and could even try hot topics to diversify your short poems.

FOR INSTANCE in my novel "Prophetia et Clémence la revanche contre la barbarie" that you can read on Monbestseller.com I've written some english poems page 31 and all through the novel but they never approach love or relationship or anxiety, woes, distress.

Maybe you should try to be more joyful and a positive spirit. Though I give you 4 stars for your work.

"LOVE EXPERIMENT" est le "Livre le +" du 1er juillet. Retrouvez l’article qui vous donnera envie de le lire : https://www.monbestseller.com/actualites-litteraire-conseil/11366-2-eboo.... N'oubliez pas de laisser un commentaire à l'auteur, c’est pour cela qu’il a publié son roman sur monBestSeller.

These poems are beautiful because they are speaking about love and friendship. But they speak also of suffering, hurt and pain because sometimes unfortunately love or friendship causes grief and sadness. Theses poems are great because they remind us that joy and sorrow are part of life and generally one does not go without the other. I enjoyed reading your poems and was deeply touched by some of them. I thank you for sharing your emotions and feelings.

Une écriture sublime pour une écrivaine sublime, une poésie qui transporte et fait frissonner : merci bbun ❤️❤️